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    • twestwood
      CommentAuthortwestwood
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    Hiya all you lovely ladies

    We are needin some advise from you all.

    We have our save the dates cards they are magnets with a caricature we got when we got engaged. The thing we need help with is the majoity of our guests are needing to travel from england to scotland and i was wanting to let them know that there is rooms at the castle but as we have exclusive use of the castle the whole weekend the rooms can only be booked through us and want them to know the price of the rooms so they have time to save. We know this information normally goes in the full invitations but i want to put it in with the save the dates so they are prepared.

    Our problem is I have no idea how to word this,Can someone help please?

    Thank you
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    • x~Hails~x
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    Can you include a card in along with the magnet?
    So you have the magnet with the pic on saying your names save the date then the date on
    Then on a seperate card put all the castle details on?

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    • twestwood
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    Hi Hails

    Yeah we have ordered some open out cards which i will cut slit in 2 corners for the magnet to go its more the wording on what to put into the card, i dont want it to be too much detail as that would go in invites.

    xx
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    • KellyB81
      CommentAuthorKellyB81
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    we did little poems to go in with our magnets in a notecard, - maybe rather than putting all the info in you could add a line or two about rooms and contacting you for the info or a site where you display all the info.

    This was ours - tailored at the bottom to say evening invitation or invitation to follow, we have some relatives who live far away and may need to book time off work even just to attend the evening

    We're making it official!
    And becoming Mr & Mrs B,
    So write it on your calendar,
    There's going to be a party!

    While we decide on flowers,
    Dresses and what kind of cake,
    We wanted to let you know,
    That we do know the date!

    Hope it gives you some ideas xx

    Kelly x


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    • KellyB81
      CommentAuthorKellyB81
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    You could maybe add...

    That we do know the venue and the date!

    There are rooms available at the castle,
    so before you start to look,
    for accommodation close to the venue,
    give us a call for info & to book!

    Kelly x


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    • twestwood
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    Thanks kelly, thats food for thought

    defo ike the upbeatness to that

    xx
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    • KellyB81
      CommentAuthorKellyB81
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    No worries - hope you get it sorted soon xxx

    Kelly x


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    • twestwood
      CommentAuthortwestwood
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    Thanks again Kelly

    Ive just spent the last hour thinking and I've come up with this, what do you think?


    On our special day 
    And its time to hit the hay
    Make sure your not a million miles away
    And stay In our exclusive venue that's tucked away
    So let's enjoy the cocktails
    And Contact us for details 

    Xxx
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    • twestwood
      CommentAuthortwestwood
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    There was summit not right with the last one do changed it to this, can I get ur honest opinion please?

    On our special day
    When it's time to hit the hay
    Make sure ur not a million miles away
    We would love u to stay 
    In our exclusive castle that's tucked away
    So let's have some cocktails
    Get in touch for details

    Xxx
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    • b2bnicola
      CommentAuthorb2bnicola
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    What about for the last two lines:

    "Please call us for the information
    All you'll need is the transportation"

    ??? Im rubbish btw lol

    Happily Married! :) xxx


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    • twestwood
      CommentAuthortwestwood
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    Thanks b2bnicola

    The guests that are coming are mainly from England so Im not goin to be sorting their travel arrangements, I just wanted them to know there is nothin really beside the castle and all the rooms need to be booked through me as we have exclusive use of it so they won't be able to book anything themselves.

    Thanks for the input tho it's grately apprieciates

    Xx
 

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