I e-mailed my parents over some different invite wordings for them to review. and my dad just sent back his own suggestion.
Mr and Mrs Clarke would like to invite you to the wedding of Sussanna and Mathew on 16 March 2013 at 3pm at the ******** ******** hotel in Stevenage (just because they need someone to attend) the cost will be £55 per head and this will include sandwiches. All other food and drink will need to purchased
i edited to hotel name, i dont wanna get in trouble lol
what do people think?!?
CommentAuthorJanie
edited
my ex husband is from stevenage, though he doesnt live there anymore his family do!
We arent having anything like mr and mrs etc as neither parents are hosting the wedding, but your wording is spot on
we are having
AMie & JAnie would like to invite you to share in thier love and happiness as they exchange their vows of marriage, and start thier new lives together at 4pm on august 10th 2013 at..... then the venues
Remember : To the world you may be just one person,
BUT to one person you may just be THE WORLD x x x
CommentAuthorsussie
small world lol.
that was one of the sensible ideas I sent over to them lol
CommentAuthorMrsT2Be
I love it Sussie, its really relaxed. Your dad sounds a legend!
Our princess was Born 07/06/09
He proposed...I said yes! 27/10/10
Graduate then....
We become the Taylors and I marry my best friend! 4/10/14
CommentAuthorsussie
I really wish i could use it, but not all my family or matts would take it as the joke is meant. :o(
For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul.
CommentAuthorElle23
I think it is very original and funny if you know the sense of humour.......... some people may not get it though and therefore may decline the invite?
To be wed on our 10 year anniversary! 23.08.2013
CommentAuthorsussie
i know, he not serious It just made me laugh and i thought i would spread a little joy