ok ok im in panic mode

celebrant aka person conducting our ceremony has just emailed me to say she's getting to work on our ceremony script in next day or 2 and is wondering if we have sorted our vows??? im like o nooooooo im panicing

I promise to respect and love you every day for the rest of my life
to always be myself as long as im your wife
Im always here when you need me, in every single way.
I cherish your love which gets me through each day
I adore you as a person, as a lover and a friend
I promise to keep by your side until the very end

How does that sound?? I quite like it!!

and here's prob h2b thinking he got more time lol xx

aww thats really lovely xx short and sweet xx good luck

thats lovely u mind if i suggest one thing thoug? on the third line id switch it yo day or night that way your not ending two lines on the same word but thats just me im particular about things like that lol

but theyre lovely hun xx

edited it candy lol it does look better

im rather impressed lol x

lol i just think it flows better :D youve done a great job :P

either way i'm loving it

sounds lovely to me

and h2b need to get is butt into gear doesn't he maybe you could give him some websites to look at

well if were making it rhyme for the second line how about ill always be myself even as your wife lol

ive texted him to say ems that he might have to NOT play world of warcrap tonight lol and explained why...so he said he;ll sort them tomorrow lol

and thanks..ive just cried lol xx

awwww sweet they are great well done xx

be interesting to see what he comes up wtih lol

now im maybe thinking instead of "i crave your love which gets me through the day"

" i cherise your love which gets me through...." or ...gets me through the day lol

ahhhhhhhh

ohhh cherish does sound much more romantic

cherish much better the first 2 lines dont rhyme but the last 4 do do you want it all to rhyme or you happy with it that way ( just observations xx)

They sound really nice hun

ok dokey ill go change it lol

oo so u did i missed that lol soz candy :D

in the first line to make it flow better you could take out "every day" as you have the word day in there already (again another suggestion)

Hides in a corner xx

ive just realised between us weve taken the vows u wrote and like a changed nearly every bit lol sorrrrrrrrrry becca lol xx

*ahem* candy i've just changed more

sorry becca u know i luff ya really

hee hee waits for becca response xx

Becca's run away to clean but sure she'll be back to check

hehe what have we done lol *sends love a kisses to becca to apologise lol

yeyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy ( comes out of hiding lol )

I think it sounds great both ways lol xx