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    • louise88
      CommentAuthorlouise88
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    I must have ready 20 odd threads about wording for invites but as everyones wedding is slightly different I wanted to double check that I have worded this well.

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    G and L
    Request the pleasure and company of
    .............Joe bloggs....................

    at church,
    address,
    post code
    at 12:30
    ----------------------------------------------
    (a)
    We would also love for you to
    join us in the evening celebrations at
    Venue from 7:30pm
    ----------------------------------------------
    (b)
    Followed by a reception at Venue at
    3:30 and evening celebrations
    --------------------------------------------

    Option (a) is an invite for guests not invited to the reception and (b) is for guests who will join us all day.

    I would really appreciate any advice or suggestions on this. We will be including RSVP cards and a note saying more info to follow.
    Also the vicar suggested maybe we could work into the wording for people to arrive at the church 15 minutes earlier as 12:30 is when the actual service starts. Thing is all I can think is to word it as 12:15 but then I don't want people to think that's when it starts and turn up even earlier than that!!!

    Oh dear lol too much thinking for a Sunday afternoon lol :/

    Anyway I really,truly would appreciate any help you can give xx

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    • Stevie_Dee
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    I would possible under your last line include

    Please reply by (deadline date)
    R.S.V.P. Enclosed xxx

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    • Stevie_Dee
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    Oh also on our invites we have
    Please reply by (deadline date)
    R.S.V.P Enclosed

    For more info visit

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    • louise88
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    Oh thank you :) xx

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    • kellyc13
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    looks good to me hun, i agree with stevie-dee you need a RSVP date and we have also put our wedding website at the bottom. x

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    • Tinkerbell
      CommentAuthorTinkerbell
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    RSVP-date-i-would-say-is-a-must,but-other-than-that-looking-good

    xxx

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    • jrs921
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    ye def a rsvp date all else looks perfect xx

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    • louise88
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    Oh yeh lol I have the date written on the draft infront of me, don't know how I missed it! lol

    Thanks a lot girls xx

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    • Stevie_Dee
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    Looks great xxx

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    • jrs921
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    we have put our name and adress on the back of the envelope and also we are puting in a sticker with our name and adress on it so they can stick that onto the envelope for the rsvp response so we kno0w the adress will be right lol tryn to cover everything xx

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    • louise88
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    That's a great idea jrs :) hmm that would be helpful xx

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    • jrs921
      CommentAuthorjrs921
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    no probs thats what we are here for to help eachother with planning and ideas xxx

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    • louise88
      CommentAuthorlouise88
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    The service starts at 12:30 but we would rather people be there at 12:15 as I will be arriving at 12:30.
    How do you word that into the invites? lol xx

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    • Rachie :D
      CommentAuthorRachie :D
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    How about Church X, postcode
    The service will start at 12 30 pm, doors will open at 12 15pm

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    • louise88
      CommentAuthorlouise88
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    Thank you, I'll try that :) xx

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    • Fruity_pops
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    maybe put something like:

    at church,
    address,
    post code
    for a 12.30 start
    ----------------------------------------------
    at church,
    address,
    post code
    at 12.30
    (please arrive 15mins before service starts)
    ----------------------------------------------
    or maybe sending a little order of the day out with ur iinvite so they know the time of which they start so they can plan more around that

    hope this helps not that good with words

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