Please can you check over my guest info before I print it off as I want to get it done before the h2b gets home and I don't want to risk there being any mistakes on them. I have copied and pasted directly so if you could leave a comment with any mistakes I would be ever so grateful.
Hotels Bosworth Hall Hotel has executive rooms available for guests at a room rate of £100 per couple and £15 per child inclusive of breakfast. To book call reception and quote Kevin and Joanne’s wedding. We have been informed that standard rooms can be booked online through other agencies at a lower price so please check before booking. Other accommodation in the area: The Gatehouse - £60 double + £10 per room for continental breakfast Cadeby Lane, Cadeby, Market Bosworth, Warwickshire. CV13 0BA. Tel: 01455 292259 Ye Olde Red Lion - Double Room with full English breakfast £701Park Street, Market Bosworth, Warwickshire. CV13 0LL. Tel 01455 291713 The Royal Arms - Double room £65.00-£85.00 and £8.75 for breakfastMain Street, Sutton Cheney, Near Market Bosworth, Leicestershire/Warwickshire.CV13 0AG Tel: 01455 290263
Address & Directions Bosworth Hall Hotel, Market Bosworth, Warwickshire, CV13 0LP Tel: 01455 291919 | Fax: 01455 292442 The following website gives full details on how to find Bosworth Hall Hotel
The nearest train station is in Hinckley which is 8.5 miles from Market Bosworth. There are buses that run to Market Bosworth but guests are advised to check the running times nearer to the day. If anyone would like to attend the wedding but does not have any transport to get there then please contact either Kevin or Joanne as they may be able to arrange something.
Order of day 1.30pm Guests arrive! 1.40pm Bride arrives 2.00pm Civil ceremony in the Wolston lounge 3.00pm Blessing in St Peter’s church in Bosworth grounds 3.45pm Reception drinks and canapés 5.45pm Wedding breakfast in the Harcourt suite 8.30pm Evening entertainment in the Harcourt suite 9.00pm Cutting of the cake 9.30 Light buffet 12.00am Bed time!
Menu Starter 1: Roasted red pepper and tomato soup served with basil croutons Starter 2:Duo of salmon smoked and poached served with a crispy leaf salad Main 1:Baked supreme of chicken accompanied with a white wine and chive sauce Main 2:Potato cake topped with asparagus and glazed with a stilton welsh rarebit All served with a selection of seasonal vegetables and potatoes Dessert: Citrus lemon tart served with a vanilla and mint cream Child 1: Tomato soup, half of main 1 or 2 followed by ice cream Child 2: Tomato soup, chicken nuggets, chips and beans followed by ice cream
Gift list
We do not have a wedding list nor request for certain things. All we want is your company and the memories the day brings. A financial gift would be lovely and appreciated by us but please do not feel pressured as this is really not a must. The choice is really up to you and we would like to say we hope you come enjoy yourselves and have a lovely day
CommentAuthorMrsOwen
you need a comma between the royal arms breakfast and main street thinks thats it xx
the greatest thing is to love and to be loved in return
Yes I just spotted that. Its amazing how things creap in that you don't see no matter how many times you read it.
CommentAuthorx ashlil x
is it £70 and then address starting 1 Park Street? x
CommentAuthorMel D
As you wish .... here's what I spotted ... xx
Ye Olde Red Lion - Double Room with full English breakfast £701Park Street, Market Bosworth, Warwickshire. CV13 0LL. Tel 01455 291713 ***Need a space or dash between £70 and 1 park Street***
The Royal Arms - Double room £65.00-£85.00 and £8.75 for breakfastMain Street, Sutton Cheney, Near Market Bosworth, Leicestershire/Warwickshire.CV13 0AG Tel: 01455 290263 *** need a space between breakfast and Main street***
The following website gives full details on how to find Bosworth Hall Hotel ***no link***
Menu - you have some entries which have spaces after (time): and some which have no spaces after the :
gift list poem: 2nd line nor *a* request
Got married Sat 28/05/2011
Renewing vows Sat 29/05/2021
We're planning WELL in advance!!
CommentAuthorx ashlil x
think thats it then, seems ok to me x
CommentAuthorx ashlil x
im hungry now ive read your menu lol x
CommentAuthorXLittleMissMe!X
Oooooo Thanks for that. I think the problem with the hotel details is because of the formatting. I have it all spaced out in word and on here it squishes it all together but I have changed it. Thanks so much for all your help. x x
CommentAuthorClairebear67
Hi Jo first mistake under your list of hotels for Ye Olde Red Lion there is no space between the price and park street. The Royal Arms breakfast and main you have as one word.
Thats it i have looked over it twice for you and cant see anymore mistakes, they are minor. hope that is ok. xx
Making me hungry by the way reading your menu : ) looks fabulous. xx
CommentAuthorXLittleMissMe!X
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Hotels Bosworth Hall Hotel has executive rooms available for guests at a room rate of £100 per couple and £15 per child inclusive of breakfast. To book call reception and quote Kevin and Joanne’s wedding. We have been informed that standard rooms can be booked online through other agencies at a lower price so please check before booking. Other accommodation in the area: The Gatehouse - £60 double + £10 per room for continental breakfast. Cadeby Lane, Cadeby, Market Bosworth, Warwickshire. CV13 0BA. Tel: 01455 292259 Ye Olde Red Lion - £70 Double Room with full English breakfast. 1Park Street, Market Bosworth, Warwickshire. CV13 0LL. Tel 01455 291713 The Royal Arms - Double room £65.00-£85.00 and £8.75 for breakfast. Main Street, Sutton Cheney, Near Market Bosworth, Leicestershire/Warwickshire.CV13 0AG Tel: 01455 290263
Address & Directions Bosworth Hall Hotel, Market Bosworth, Warwickshire, CV13 0LP Tel: 01455 291919 | Fax: 01455 292442 The following website gives full details on how to find Bosworth Hall Hotel
The nearest train station is in Hinckley which is 8.5 miles from Market Bosworth. There are buses that run to Market Bosworth but guests are advised to check the running times nearer to the day. If anyone would like to attend the wedding but does not have any transport to get there then please contact either Kevin or Joanne as they may be able to arrange something. Order of day 1.30pm Guests arrive! 1.40pm Bride arrives 2.00pm Civil ceremony in the Wolston lounge 3.00pm Blessing in St Peter’s church in Bosworth grounds 3.45pm Reception drinks and canapés 5.45pm Wedding breakfast in the Harcourt suite 8.30pm Evening entertainment in the Harcourt suite 9.00pm Cutting of the cake 9.30 Light buffet 12.00am Bed time! Menu Starter 1: Roasted red pepper and tomato soup served with basil croutons Starter 2: Duo of salmon smoked and poached served with a crispy leaf salad Main 1: Baked supreme of chicken accompanied with a white wine and chive sauce Main 2: Potato cake topped with asparagus and glazed with a stilton welsh rarebit All served with a selection of seasonal vegetables and potatoes Dessert: Citrus lemon tart served with a vanilla and mint cream Child 1: Tomato soup, half of main 1 or 2 followed by ice cream Child 2: Tomato soup, chicken nuggets, chips and beans followed by ice cream
We do not have a wedding list nor request for certain things. All we want is your company and the memories the day brings. A financial gift would be lovely and appreciated by us but please do not feel pressured as this is really not a must. The choice is really up to you and we would like to say we hope you come enjoy yourselves and have a lovely day
CommentAuthorXLittleMissMe!X
Right made some changes again. See if it is right this time.
CommentAuthorXLittleMissMe!X
I have to admit I do like the sound of it too. Just can't decide which main to have so think we will have to book a taster meal sometime.
CommentAuthorx ashlil x
i think i would have main 1 and starter 1 mmmmm need to go raid the cupboard now lol x
CommentAuthorGemmagem1987
Hi jo, you need to put a space between 1 and park street, also need to end with a full stop xx
Soon 2b Mrs Wynne
02/07/2011
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CommentAuthorMrsOwen
what about a space between the 1 and park street?x
the greatest thing is to love and to be loved in return
CommentAuthorXLittleMissMe!X
Oh crap what am I like? Its done now. I'm so glad I have you girls to keep an eye on me.
CommentAuthorCroc
haha i didnt spot any of them ... must be my dysleixa haha ...
"better a witty fool, than a foolish wit" shakespeare
CommentAuthorXLittleMissMe!X
I've been on the tablets again so my head is more fuzzy than usual. (not that I'm that good at spelling at the best of times) When we did the invites I had put seventieth instead of seventeenth and we only noticed after I had stuck half of them in. Ooopsie.
CommentAuthorCroc
haha.... this is why i have given the job of stationary away other wise lord know where people would end up!!!
"better a witty fool, than a foolish wit" shakespeare
CommentAuthorXLittleMissMe!X
hehe that is because it is stationery and you would be stationary if you miss spelt them. ;0)
OMG I do belive I have become my Engish teacher making bad jokes out of our language. Oh crap!
CommentAuthortwirler
Hi Jo
Being critical your hotel list would look better more spaced out so summat like
The Gatehouse £60 double + £10 per room for continental breakfast. Cadeby Lane, Cadeby, Market Bosworth, Warwickshire. CV13 0BA. Tel: 01455 292259
Ye Olde Red Lion £70 Double Room with full English breakfast. 1 Park Street, Market Bosworth, Warwickshire. CV13 0LL. Tel 01455 291713
The Royal Arms Double room £65.00-£85.00 and £8.75 for breakfast. Main Street, Sutton Cheney, Near Market Bosworth, Leicestershire/Warwickshire.CV13 0AG Tel: 01455 290263
Put your titles in BOLD
A few spaces before you start your order of service
and again before the menu
in your poem you have the word really in both sentences maybe dropping it from the first line would help it flow
My uncle is a professional proof reader so i am over critical lol he did my wording on mine lmao xx
Officially Mrs Joseph
back on the diet re set my target
CommentAuthorXLittleMissMe!X
Thanks Twirler. I had them spaced on word with bold but it doesn't show up any of the format on here. It is a good job I hadn't printed them all out as h2b noticed lower case d on double room and also two have the prices first then double and the other has double then price and I've also put double on one and double room on the other two. Oh I'm going to get there some time this year with them lol. I think I need your uncle. I will revisit the poem again too. x x
CommentAuthortwirler
Bless you you will get there but if u need him to have a look email me lol xx
Officially Mrs Joseph
back on the diet re set my target
