I really like this gift poem but I don't like the line that says money and really want to reword it. any suggestions?
The most important gift to us is to have you share our day but should you wish to contribute in some other way then help us on our honeymoon in our chosen paradise a little extra spending money would be really nice.
“Love, n. A temporary insanity curable by marriage.”
-Ambrose Bierce
CommentAuthorMrs M Wade
edited
Could you not have-
The most important gift to us Is to have you share our day But should you wish to contribute In some other way Then help us on our honeymoon In our chosen paradise A little donation would be really nice
Became Mrs Wade 06/08/2016
CommentAuthorthefuture:Mrs_Hurren
I like your suggestion mrs wade x
CommentAuthorVictoriaL46
Amended the above poem for flow.
The most important gift to us Is to have you share our day But should you wish to contribute In some other special way Please help us on our honeymoon In our chosen paradise A little donation here or there would be really nice.
Met in Nov 2005
Engaged 13th June 2013
Becomes Mrs Stewart on 10th Aug 2015 Honeymoon in Florida!
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